The Elements Review: Interconnected Narratives of Pain
Twelve-year-old Freya stays with her self-absorbed mother in Cornwall when she comes across teenage twins. "The only thing better than being aware of a secret," they advise her, "is having one of your own." In the weeks that follow, they will rape her, then entomb her breathing, a mix of anxiety and annoyance passing across their faces as they ultimately free her from her temporary coffin.
This could have served as the shocking main event of a novel, but it's just one of multiple horrific events in The Elements, which gathers four short novels – released individually between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters navigate past trauma and try to find peace in the contemporary moment.
Debated Context and Thematic Exploration
The book's publication has been overshadowed by the presence of Earth, the subsequent novella, on the preliminary list for a significant LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, the majority other nominees pulled out in dissent at the author's gender-critical views – and this year's prize has now been terminated.
Conversation of trans rights is not present from The Elements, although the author explores plenty of big issues. Anti-gay prejudice, the effect of conventional and digital platforms, caregiver abandonment and assault are all investigated.
Distinct Stories of Suffering
- In Water, a mourning woman named Willow moves to a remote Irish island after her husband is jailed for horrific crimes.
- In Earth, Evan is a soccer player on trial as an accomplice to rape.
- In Fire, the grown-up Freya manages vengeance with her work as a surgeon.
- In Air, a dad travels to a memorial service with his teenage son, and ponders how much to divulge about his family's past.
Pain is piled on trauma as damaged survivors seem doomed to bump into each other again and again for all time
Linked Narratives
Relationships multiply. We first meet Evan as a boy trying to flee the island of Water. His trial's panel contains the Freya who shows up again in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, works with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Supporting characters from one account reappear in cottages, pubs or legal settings in another.
These storylines may sound tangled, but the author understands how to power a narrative – his previous popular Holocaust drama has sold millions, and he has been rendered into numerous languages. His businesslike prose sparkles with suspenseful hooks: "after all, a doctor in the burns unit should understand more than to play with fire"; "the first thing I do when I come to the island is change my name".
Personality Development and Narrative Strength
Characters are portrayed in concise, impactful lines: the compassionate Nigerian priest, the troubled pub landlord, the daughter at conflict with her mother. Some scenes resonate with tragic power or perceptive humour: a boy is punched by his father after urinating at a football match; a biased island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour trade insults over cups of diluted tea.
The author's talent of transporting you wholeheartedly into each narrative gives the return of a character or plot strand from an prior story a authentic frisson, for the initial several times at least. Yet the collective effect of it all is dulling, and at times nearly comic: pain is accumulated upon pain, chance on chance in a dark farce in which damaged survivors seem doomed to meet each other continuously for all time.
Conceptual Complexity and Final Assessment
If this sounds not exactly life and resembling purgatory, that is aspect of the author's message. These wounded people are oppressed by the crimes they have experienced, stuck in cycles of thought and behavior that agitate and spiral and may in turn damage others. The author has discussed about the influence of his individual experiences of mistreatment and he portrays with understanding the way his cast navigate this perilous landscape, reaching out for solutions – solitude, frigid water immersion, reconciliation or invigorating honesty – that might let light in.
The book's "basic" framing isn't terribly educational, while the rapid pace means the examination of gender dynamics or digital platforms is mostly surface-level. But while The Elements is a flawed work, it's also a completely readable, survivor-centered saga: a welcome rebuttal to the typical obsession on detectives and perpetrators. The author demonstrates how suffering can permeate lives and generations, and how years and tenderness can quieten its aftereffects.